Elusive shadows
Thoughts banter within my soul
Waiting to be penned
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Footprints in the sand
As elusive as the words
Floating from my heart
Petrina Lesko
December 2010
I am linking this post both to Creative Writing Ink for this weeks photo prompt and to One Shot Wednesday.
11 comments:
Really like how the second stanza connects to the first, as well as the emphasize placed on the words coming from the heart. Cool pic prompt response.
Lovely haikus...
very nice use of the word elusive :)
Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender
You've got some excellent phrases going here, that make pictures as vivid as the actual photograph. Thoughts bantering in my head seems to happen to me a lot, too. ;-)
elegant.
you rock!
very nice
Cheers
Luke @ WordSalad
Sweet Poem and profound.
Cheers!
Aaahh... beautiful imagery! And what started as a simple thought is now a beautiful poem here! Very well written, Reflections.. Kudos!
Very nice ! I like the pun on penned! Thanks
Dear Petrina
Floating from heart... your thoughts create a vivid picture.. I liked them...
Thanks
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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Love the first haiku - completely related to it, in my own way.
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