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Sunday, December 5, 2010

A Linguering Kiss

Over at One Stop Poetry today, there is an interview of Texas photographer  Lisa Michelle Arhontidis and the photo for today's One Shoot Sunday was provided by her.  Please check out these sites for more exciting photography and for other writer's takes on this wonderful photo.


photo by Lisa Michelle Arhontidis

A Linguering Kiss

His lips trace, a kiss linguers on her neck,
Fills her with his love, his passion for her...
Hers, loving ebb, wells to meet him halfway,
Bridging the space between us, him and her.

Passions become one, united in love,
Tender moments, lost gaps between the two,
Each feeling, knowing together is US,
Feeling us, being forever in love.

Petrina Lesko
December 2010

20 comments:

dustus said...

Love the emphasis in the poem of two people meeting through space, or closing the gap that seperates. Great response to the challenge! cheers

Kodjo Deynoo said...

Us forever in love. nice poem

Helena Malheur said...

beautiful love poem.. "each feeling, knowing together is us" -- very nice!

Aquarius63 said...

A beautiful breathtaking love.

Anita.

Jerry said...

A space filled. That is what love is. Nice.

Sumit Sarkar said...

A lingering kiss...
Lovely... :)

Claudia said...

i love the lost gaps!

jaerose said...

I read this alongside 'Promised Forever' and have to say that there was a powerful connection between the two for me. The imagery of love and passion can sometimes fall into the blackness..anyway just a thought..thank you for visiting my sunday scribble..Jae

betweenhearts75 said...

I love how the "Passions become one" in this. Truly a wonderfully written connection of love. Very sweet! ~April

M.L. Gallagher said...

To read this by candlelight to your lover -- ahhh, that would be divine.

Nice one!

LouiseG

Shigune Matsui said...

Cool! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html

repressedsoul said...

I'm rather breathless now!

Pat Tillett said...

Very nice and nicely written...

Myrna R. said...

Lovely, I like the "us" in the poem. Very different.

DeLi said...

sensual in every sense!

Glynn said...

It's as if there's no space left between them. Well done.

Hope said...

beautifully done!
thank you

and thank you for your visit and comment

girldaydreaming said...

what a sweet gift love and soft kisses are... so nicely written...

RegCPA5963 said...

well done! enjoyed tender moments lost gaps between the two... thanks for sharing

Alegria Imperial said...

Nicely done! How you bridge the characters, the him and her, to the us--them and us, feeling with them. A crafted poem. Thank you.