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A Linguering Kiss
His lips trace, a kiss linguers on her neck,
Fills her with his love, his passion for her...
Hers, loving ebb, wells to meet him halfway,
Bridging the space between us, him and her.
Passions become one, united in love,
Tender moments, lost gaps between the two,
Each feeling, knowing together is US,
Feeling us, being forever in love.
Petrina Lesko
December 2010
Petrina Lesko
December 2010
20 comments:
Love the emphasis in the poem of two people meeting through space, or closing the gap that seperates. Great response to the challenge! cheers
Us forever in love. nice poem
beautiful love poem.. "each feeling, knowing together is us" -- very nice!
A beautiful breathtaking love.
Anita.
A space filled. That is what love is. Nice.
A lingering kiss...
Lovely... :)
i love the lost gaps!
I read this alongside 'Promised Forever' and have to say that there was a powerful connection between the two for me. The imagery of love and passion can sometimes fall into the blackness..anyway just a thought..thank you for visiting my sunday scribble..Jae
I love how the "Passions become one" in this. Truly a wonderfully written connection of love. Very sweet! ~April
To read this by candlelight to your lover -- ahhh, that would be divine.
Nice one!
LouiseG
Cool! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html
I'm rather breathless now!
Very nice and nicely written...
Lovely, I like the "us" in the poem. Very different.
sensual in every sense!
It's as if there's no space left between them. Well done.
beautifully done!
thank you
and thank you for your visit and comment
what a sweet gift love and soft kisses are... so nicely written...
well done! enjoyed tender moments lost gaps between the two... thanks for sharing
Nicely done! How you bridge the characters, the him and her, to the us--them and us, feeling with them. A crafted poem. Thank you.
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