Really like how the second stanza connects to the first, as well as the emphasize placed on the words coming from the heart. Cool pic prompt response.
Lovely haikus...very nice use of the word elusive :)
Nice One Shot. Love and Light, Sender
You've got some excellent phrases going here, that make pictures as vivid as the actual photograph. Thoughts bantering in my head seems to happen to me a lot, too. ;-)
very niceCheersLuke @ WordSalad
Sweet Poem and profound.Cheers!
Aaahh... beautiful imagery! And what started as a simple thought is now a beautiful poem here! Very well written, Reflections.. Kudos!
Very nice ! I like the pun on penned! Thanks
I like it.
Dear PetrinaFloating from heart... your thoughts create a vivid picture.. I liked them...Thanksॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Love the first haiku - completely related to it, in my own way.
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