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She whispers secrets
into the night
the heavens mourn
the raven's truth be told
Petrina Lesko
September 2011
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29 comments:
lovely, Petrina!
A haunting and beautiful piece.
I like the thought of the heavens mourning...
etheral - evocative
Mysterious and introspective. Thank you so much for your lovely comments on my blogs.
could be part of my post for this prompt...
nice lines...
JJRod'z
Mmm, so lovely, Petrina, a lovely word picture to go with the photo prompt.
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel
oo very nice...like the blend each line adds so much to the story and nice catch on the raven...
I really like this short piece ! very tight and melodious. Thanks!
Petrina,
The secret may afflict adversely, how cruel! Beautiful little verse!
Hank
The Raven at the Feet! How dark and mysterious! Truth be told!
John
secretive
Very deep.. Night, heavens mourn..so much in a few lines...
Truth ... yes.
Haunting with a touch of yearning. Love it...
I love what the picture has pulled out in all of us. This is a perfect fit
Hope all is well btw
Ah, makes me wish to hear the secrets that make heaven mourn.
Your words provide a great picture.
I like this very much, particularly the way it preserves the mystery of the image.
a perfect story told in a few lines,
divine magpie.
Night time secrets.....to be kept in the dark.
Love that last line!
Truth always finds a way... no matter how dark it is. Nice, nice. So much said with very little words.
Lovely stuff.
Anna :o]
The truth will out. A beautiful and mysterious piece. Thank you!
Thank you for visiting my Long Black Veil blog poem. I think our poems could be companion pieces, don't you?
this is just beautiful, perfect words for the picture.x
beautiful words... sometimes so much more is said by not telling, than it could ever be expressed otherwise.
You have lots of great content that is helpful to gain more knowledge. Best wishes.
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