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Friday, September 16, 2011

grey skies lapping down
to taste the tender moments
misty morning wakes


21 comments:

Anonymous said...

A very soft morning feeling to this short poem.

Full-On-Forward said...

It was just that grey here for two days! PERFECT!!!

John

Tarang Sinha said...

Lovely haiku!

Scarlet said...

i like misty morning ~

lovely day ~

ds said...

I like this a lot! Perfect, really. Thank you.

kaykuala said...

Petrina,
Misty mornings are invitingly friendly, warmth waiting to tapped. Love it!

Hank

Brian Miller said...

nice...i love me some misty mornings...lapping...nice verb there...great capture...

Christine said...

terrific piece, that first line just grabbed me

Daydreamertoo said...

Beautiful both picture and Haiku.

hedgewitch said...

Like the personification of morning, and the misty feel.

Pat Hatt said...

Mist rising as you do to greet, very nice.

Brian Miller said...

smiles...swinging back through on openlink night...hope you had a great day!

Arron Shilling said...

your words do justice to this wonderful picture

lynne said...

Beautiful picture to compliment beautiful words..

Ann LeFlore said...

this is lovely how the grey skies bend down thanks for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/20/the-fait-of-our-lands/

Patricia said...

A two hour school delay here... and they just called it "fog." It would have been much nicer if they had used your words. You made it beautiful.

Beachanny said...

Holding my breath waiting for an autumn morning like that. Beautiful - tasty. G.

Anonymous said...

this is a heavenly haiku, Petrina! beautiful!!! ♥

Jannie Funster said...

SWEET, to the max. I love good poetry like this.

~L said...

So jealous how you can say so much in few words... I am such the opposite ... Very beautiful work! :)

RMP said...

such a peaceful write...beautiful in its simplicity.