grey skies lapping down
to taste the tender moments
misty morning wakes
a journey filled with many familiar paths and some not yet taken... all leading to the ever-changing destinations just waiting to be discovered.
a journey filled with many familiar paths and some not yet taken... all leading to the ever-changing destinations just waiting to be discovered.
21 comments:
A very soft morning feeling to this short poem.
It was just that grey here for two days! PERFECT!!!
John
Lovely haiku!
i like misty morning ~
lovely day ~
I like this a lot! Perfect, really. Thank you.
Petrina,
Misty mornings are invitingly friendly, warmth waiting to tapped. Love it!
Hank
nice...i love me some misty mornings...lapping...nice verb there...great capture...
terrific piece, that first line just grabbed me
Beautiful both picture and Haiku.
Like the personification of morning, and the misty feel.
Mist rising as you do to greet, very nice.
smiles...swinging back through on openlink night...hope you had a great day!
your words do justice to this wonderful picture
Beautiful picture to compliment beautiful words..
this is lovely how the grey skies bend down thanks for sharing
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/20/the-fait-of-our-lands/
A two hour school delay here... and they just called it "fog." It would have been much nicer if they had used your words. You made it beautiful.
Holding my breath waiting for an autumn morning like that. Beautiful - tasty. G.
this is a heavenly haiku, Petrina! beautiful!!! ♥
SWEET, to the max. I love good poetry like this.
So jealous how you can say so much in few words... I am such the opposite ... Very beautiful work! :)
such a peaceful write...beautiful in its simplicity.
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