whispered morning breaths
golden fire lies down her path
Willow stands weeping
yesterday's shadow welcomes
Autumn's naked silhouette
Petrina Lesko
a journey filled with many familiar paths and some not yet taken... all leading to the ever-changing destinations just waiting to be discovered.
21 comments:
Petrina,
Is there a sadness here with the passing of Autumn. It appears very much so!
Hank
oh not naked yet...let me enjoy the color just a bit..smiles.
Autumn's naked silhouette ...lovely!
Autumn's naked silhouette - not too soon.. like this nature poem.. is this a tanka form?
Your pen crystalizes Autumn's beautiful beginning
But those tears will freeze soon enough in the harshness of winter, to become droplets with the hint of spring. Well written.
Beautifully rendered.
lovely - i just love autumn - :)
You captured the essence of autumn so well. I love the last line (again!) I wish it would start feeling like autumn around here soon! Rain, humidity, and 80s just isn't doing it for me! (My word verification is "psycho"-that about sums up how I feel!)
A very unique and nostalgic word painting of autumn, Petrina. Loved it.
yesterday's shadow to autumns's sillouhette - beautiful, love those lines a lot!
Beautiful...
chained the present
Ahhhhh! This is a cracking one for the coming of winter......!
I always love the visual images that your poetry evokes
Weeping willows are beautiful, it brings such incredible images to mind....... lovely poem
just swinging through to say i appreciate you..and have a great friday!
nothing better than when nature first reveals its colors and then presents herself to us in all her naked beauty..smiles...lovely write petrina
Beautiful, strong image... I really like the ending.
summer's shadow lingers for just a moment longer.
What an amazing poem...short, vivid, impacting. Well written and envisioned.
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