Over at the One Shoot Sunday Photography Interview this weeks photographer is Fee Easton sharing 5 wonderful pictures to select from... hmmmm... choices, choices.... Please stop and visit One Stop Poetry today to join us in the challenge. Here's mine:
Twas just yesterday when I saw,
First nights of stars so bright, twinkling...
Sharing a love like wonders awe,
Drawing me forever brinking.
Always to be there at the edge,
New journeys found with you to hold,
To share in the beautious ledge,
A life brazen, a life be bold.
Forever together held love,
Our secret place, still the same now,
Hands held up high, flight of the dove,
Walking one journey, always how.
Burdens of joy, laughing through tears,
Together now... and through the years.
Petrina Lesko
May 2011
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| photography of Fee Easton as shared by One Stop Poetry |
Twas just yesterday when I saw,
First nights of stars so bright, twinkling...
Sharing a love like wonders awe,
Drawing me forever brinking.
Always to be there at the edge,
New journeys found with you to hold,
To share in the beautious ledge,
A life brazen, a life be bold.
Forever together held love,
Our secret place, still the same now,
Hands held up high, flight of the dove,
Walking one journey, always how.
Burdens of joy, laughing through tears,
Together now... and through the years.
Petrina Lesko
May 2011
17 comments:
A lovely nostalgic poem about facing life together; and very strong ending couplet. Sounds like the two truly gained strength as a pair. Very well crafted, melodic stanzas.
lovely to see a love that lasts through the years...tender...the burden of joy..
very sweet poem.
Beautiful ... A love that endures and is everlasting :)
"walking one journey"... beautiful thought, and I love the ending of your poem, captures well this journey of love in this piece.
A beautiful poem, Petrina. "Together now and through the years" sounds so simple, yet I know how many joys and heartaches are shared along such a journey - until death do us part.
Love gets better with age -- this is lovely.
Truly a gem... great photo, and the poem touches my heart.
Such a sweet photo and poem to go with it. That's me and my husband not too many years hence LOL.
Always on the edge, sharing the burdens of joy. That's what it's all about, isn't it? Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing.
The last two lines really grabbed me. Love should get better because of all the struggles. Very sweet.
"Twas just yesterday when I saw"
time passes so quickly. a beautiful telling of this journey of love.
dani
a beautiful painting of togetherness and ..laughing through tears...very nice
looks lovely!
"forever together held love" great line. wonderful poem
Your poems are always filled with so much feeling !
VERY ENJOYABLE !!
JL&B
This photo seems to have taken us both to the same place. Beautifully written, Petrina. Saw the photo of Lucky as I scrolled down and it gave me chills. I have some forever-friends up there chasing rabbits with him. Sweet tribute. So hard to lose our beloved pets.
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