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| as offered by Tess Kincaid |
as does the rise of Sirius say
cycling westward for day by day
just before the sunlit skies,your Heliacal rise
draws forth all of eyes
on ropes these ones,
horizon's
edge to
play
Petrina Lesko
July 2011
This wonderful picture prompt was offered up today by Tess Kincaid for the 75th Magpie Tales prompt. This is a fabulous place for writers and poets to come together and share. To see what inspiration others have found, please follow the link and join in the fun.
21 comments:
This is super, Petrina! Lovely take on the prompt.
I made a series of egregious errors while posting my Mag 75, so I finally e-mailed Tess to see if she could fix it. I hope she can.
—Kay, Alberta, Canada
Angels playing in the sky flying through to horizon's edge. Yes, looks to be so!
smiles. lovely interpretation, Helinical rise, nice touch...
Wow, this is gorgeous, Petrina.
Great take on the prompt...I really like the ending.
'horizon's edge to play' - I like that!
Loved that take. Great words.
elegant...
Ahhh, the pieces come together in such a vivid way. Love the word combination: draws forth all of eyes on ropes, this one...
I like very much your take on this prompt.
Lovely and clever. Kudos!
Wow! You've got a real talent with words. I love the astronomical imagery.
...ah yes.. i like the flow of words in this.. i didn’t know anything ‘bout serius actually not until i found out that ‘twas just the original name of dog-star.. (:
Brightest blessings!
~Kelvin
This is such an interesting picture and I love what you have written for it. Nicely done :)
Aeria~
Very nice.
Wonderful! Wonderful!
Heliacal rise..outstanding! Beautiful, mythical trip!
Nice...I love this ad...it is great and you reach for that star in your writing - making it come alive....bkm
Lovely take on the Mag - beautiful words conjuring up an outstanding picture.
Wow! Truly lovely poem, Petrina.
Amazing how the same prompt gets so many varied responses.
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