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Sunday, July 24, 2011

Petals of Rose

soft petals of rose
sprinkled on waters for thee
his last goodnight kiss

Petrina Lesko
July 2011

Over at Jingle Poetry the theme for this week's Poetry Potluck just happens to be on Nature and Life so I shall also be linking there as well.  Hope you all have a fabulous week ahead.  I expect mine to be rather busy.

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh this is so lovely I like this piece

Brian Miller said...

ah what tender kisses those must be...

Marbles in My Pocket said...

So romantic. Lovely!

Anonymous said...

Very Nice.

Anonymous said...

Compared to a kiss,
soft petals of rose,
It must be bliss,
to receive some of those.

Romantic and tender kisses. Thanks for sharing.

jabblog said...

Sweet and somewhat poignant.

Friko said...

how very romantic.

Jingle said...

sweet and lovely.

Anonymous said...

yummy :) ah (sigh) loveliness!
emjoy the potluck!!!

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WINDOWLAD said...

..this is sweet.. i think of bathing with rose petals.. thanks for the read.(:

~Kelvin

ds said...

Sweet, gentle, loving. Lovely.
Thank you.

JamieDedes said...

Well done for Potluck! A lovely poem. Thank you! :-)

Katherine said...

Lovely :)

ASHISH BARDHAN said...

Nice haiku
Take a look on my works
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
see ya there !! ;)

Anonymous said...

so sweet. I love how you saw it :)

Anonymous said...

{{wistful sigh}}

stunning haiku/senryu, Petrina!

dani ♥