Had just a quick glance at the prompt early this morning, then a busy, busy day in the high 80's with scorching sunlight... Hours upon hours later, I sit here trying to let all of the busy moments rinse away with thoughts of rain and this wonderful prompt.....
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| Mag 60 at Magpie Tales |
Dim darkened clouds, angered skies sash,
Holding your tears well into the night,
Greying worlds collide.
Tensions well beneath holding too tight,
Thundering voices, lightning crash.
Drenching moments bathe in a flash,
Rinsing free tender hearts of sunlight,
Colorful worlds pride.
Emerging seeds blossom within sight,
Rising wonders, white mountain ash.
Stormy skies abide,
Colors rising stride,
Timbers reaching, white mountain ash.
Petrina Lesko
April 2011
I am linking this poem over at Magpie Tales for this weeks prompt #60. Now I'm off to check out all the other wonderful poets. Please join us.
21 comments:
Beautifully captured, and loved your intro to the prompt too!
Beautiful. I love the line, 'Holding your tears well into the night."
What an image.
So refreshing.
"Holding your tears well into the night,"
"Emerging seeds blossom within sight"..it all comes to pass if we have patience..
I am so envious of your 80's- I would do alot
for 60's and sun!
especially like the last 3 lines! Thanks.
Lovely, especially when experiencing weather in such polarity!
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very refreshing ... loved reading :)
Serene and intense..
I viewed a phase come in, create jumps and then go..
Eventually everything passes by with some patience n courage..
"Holding your tears well into the night" is such a poignant line.
Vivid nature-centric stuff. Effective.
From entry to last line of your beautiful poem this was perfect Reflections! :-)
What beautiful use of words. Amazing images.
Lisa
InspiredbyLisa
Carefully crafted. Thank you.
beautiful,
I see the vivid imagery...
this is what a busy, busy, hot day yields? quite lovely, light and complicated in the most refreshing way... i enjoyed reading this poem several times over...
Very lively and refreshing!
great imagery!
love the repetition of the white mountain ash...thats my favorite line...lovely..bkm
I was riveted from the first line. You write beautifully.
Awesome and riveting...your talent sucks me in.
liked it
felt like colours
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