The following illustration by Florence Edith Storer was offered this morning at Monday's Child: fair of face where many talented writers come together to offer children's poetry based the illustrated prompt posted each week. Come join us.
The following illustration by Florence Edith Storer was offered this morning at Monday's Child: fair of face where many talented writers come together to offer children's poetry based the illustrated prompt posted each week. Come join us.
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| Illustration: Florence Edith Storer |
Secrets to Share
we gathered
within blustery
summer days
awaiting
secrets held to share with friends
our special moments
Petrina Lesko
April 2011
The poetry form shared here is Shadorma, a spanish form taught today over at One Stop Poetry in this weeks form lesson. This is my first attempt at Shadorma and I will be linking there at well.
17 comments:
lest we forget
Peace,hp
oh those innocent days
Excellent capture of two important things we often forget as adults, sharing and trust.
I love those blustery summer days! The wind cools you off and life feels so sweet! You capture the mood nicely!
Wonderful imagery and form. And I too love those blustery summer days! :)
Oh to live somewhere summer is mild. It is weighty and wet here in Texas and when the wind blows sandy and irritating. Yet I know there are gentler climes where summer is savored for its every hour and held in contrast to brutal winter. This was quite lovely and a well written piece in the shadorma form. Gay
Aww, secrets among friends, and a good Shadorma...you got the counting right, unline me!
smiles. this brought to mind some wonderful memories...
this is precious. the sweet innocence of it and the simplicity of the form goes nicely with the photo prompt.
Petrina - yours is the second Shadorma I read on this prompt! I think you inspired me - I must write one tomorrow! ☼
Summers past...I remember it well...a delight...
♥ ஆ
Lovely job, taking two separate prompts and beautifully melding them into a perfect whole.
Simply lovely....blustery Summer days...I love it ..I love this illustration ...one of my favorites..bkm
Short and sweet and too the point. Very nice.
lisa
InspiredbyLisa
So real...
Secrets shared then wafted away on the breeze---I love this shadorma form for its ability to pull just a wispy bit out of the current. Yours is lovely.
Perfect for both the picture and the form. Lots of memories to reflect on. Well done!
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