The theme for this weeks prompt for Poetry Potluck Monday was Moods, Feelings and Emotions. I have thought about the miriad of emotions that could be covered and came up with this short poem, a haiku on happiness...
Images of Happiness
Fluttering butterfly wings in the breeze,
Polinating flowers for the birth of new blossoms,
Timid smiles bursting with colors of joy.
17 comments:
beautiful happiness Haiku,
Thanks for sharing with potluck.
u rock!
awwwwwe happiness!!! I like :)
It was nice to visit the hopefulness of Spring here on the cusp of Winter. Thank you for this vivid little gem of a poem.
Here's mine: http://notatameblog.wordpress.com/2010/08/10/zygote/
The last line of your haiku has the most beautiful imagery attached to it. I loved this!
A wonderful expression of emotions.
Anita.
The excitement of new beginnings, a very hopeful piece.
So good to read this lovely poem about joy..I needed that!!
a very happy haiku. enjoyed it. nice job!
awesome imagery... such vivid pistures of nature described so beautifully, they indeed bring happiness. awesome :D
Love Happy..my favorite emotion!
this indeed speaks happiness!
I really like this. Whimsical almost. They are like fluttering butterflies aren't they? love the last line. this is a great piece!
Dear Reflections
Timid smiles bursting with joy.. very great haiku... perfect image creation.. I liked it. Thanks
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This is cool. Flowers, butterflies, colours. Very uplifting poem.
A sweet little delight. Made me smile! :-)
wonderful poem. you have said a lot with only a few words. i am wondering how this is haiku. the feel is haiku but it does not follow the typical syllabic pattern. not a criticism, just wondering. the writing is great regardless.
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thanks for linking up with potluck.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/
award/treats for you. smiles.
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