The following poem was prompted by both the photo prompt #37 of Willow at her Magpie Tales and by the Sunday Scribblings prompt #237 Harvest... I hope you enjoy my interpretation of these. To read others click on the links.
Soaking and sloshing, the essence of a new day.
As white and crisp as a child's innocence.
Forming reflections of the latest of seasons.
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| Magpie Tales #37 |
The rain rinses the branches bare of its leaves.
Harvested, the stark nakedness in silhouettes.
Settling delicately into the winter bed.
21 comments:
Wonderfully written, I loved this (and I love your darling dogs!) :o)
smiles. very nice verse...naked silouhetes settling in the winter bed...nice.
your images are wonderful...!!
A beautiful, refreshing read.
Dear Reflections: These two poems are very Masterful Haiku. In "Reflections" the cheerful image of eternal youth "Soaking and sloshing". And in "Silhouhette" The stark Imagery of the tree as a life drawing subject;
"the nakedness in silhouettes". Refreshing style!
"The rain rinses the branches bare of its leaves." is a great line
lovely images. As white and crisp as a child's innocence - nice.
simple lines,
magical painting.
love your tale.
I like the images this conjures up. Nice Magpie.
I love these. My favorite lines are the second in the first poem and the final line in the last. Beautiful!
That is a really lovely take on the changing of the season. Living in the Ozarks, I see a lot of stark nakedness come mid to late November. You have a beautiful way with words.
Really wonderful images..."rain rinses the branches bare....love it that is what happens here"..we have only rain in winter, lots of rain -I will remember that image when the time comes -usually in November....bkm
lovely reflection of changing seasons.
Beautiful words.. I saw images in my mind reading this one.. xx
Your poem reminded how refreshing the changing of seasons is. New possibilities, new hopes. Beautiful imagery!
i like the..Settling delicately into the winter bed...verse..sounds so peaceful
This felt like the very essence of winter and reminds me why I love it so. I enjoyed this piece tremendously!
Nice Magpie -- I LOVE the last stanza!
Beautiful writing Dasuntoucha - "settling delicately into the winter bed" - gorgeous...
Ooh... love that last line, in particular. Highly evocative.
Loved that last stanza. Really nicely written with great imagery. Nice magpie!
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