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Monday, October 11, 2010

Lonely Is the Night

The following is a simple attempt at haiku, written to participate in One Single Impression Prompt #137:  Lonely.   Hope you all enjoy...


Lonely is the night,
Solitary star so bright,
Darkness round your light.

6 comments:

The Write Girl said...

This is beautiful...I love all the images you create here. Lovely haiku.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

The final line has such impact! You said so much with so few words.

Geraldine said...

I like it!


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Harshad mehta said...

Deep.

ananchorage said...

I really like this take on the prompt. I hadn't thought in terms of nature.

gloria

gabrielle said...

night sky, deep and infinite. an eternal dance.

loved this gem.