stillness overtakes
tendered burning moments light
shadows of grey clouds
colorful dances
air-born as leaves change these days
fluttering downward
blankets of firelight
line paths once clear and leading
to thought-filled doorways
lending forth dark nights
scattered stars sparkle upon
simple silhouettes
bringing new beauty
day becomes nights shadow-light
worlds become quiet
reflective shadows
dance upon icy waters
as we lay resting
Petrina Lesko
October 2011
linked to MMWP - Darkness
19 comments:
Lovely, lyrical flow to this one, Petrina, with perfect images of the contrast between light and darkness. I'm so glad you joined us today.
Very nice. Love the flow and some wonderful lines in this piece, sparking some can't-miss imagery. Thanks for the read
Wonderful images painted with words.
This fills me with such a peaceful feeling. Wonderful.
Petrina, this was hypnotic. It gave me such a sense of peace. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks.
wow, what a calming poem. I really like it!
Very peaceful and flowing words that were a pleasure to read :)
there is a soothing flow to this...i just wanted to sigh at the end...nice textures along the way as well...
I agree with ,Brian!This is a truly soothing piece.A feeling of peace kinda engulf me as I read.
Beautiful write,Petrina!!
Such a beautiful peaceful picture you have painted as we come into Fall.
Blessings
Beautiful series of haiku! Makes me want to snuggle up with a warm blanket and a nice cup of tea!
It is cool, serene and peaceful. This is apt description for both the pic and your verse. Thanks for sharing, Petrina!
Hank
I like the night shadow lights... beautiful phrase.
Beautiful set of haiku. I liked the last one especially.
lovely words!!!! amazing how words can paint a picture!!!
This is so peaceful ... calming ... therapeutic ...
Well done !
...a pleasant way to end my evening. Well done ;)
El
shadows dancing upon icy waters while we lay resting...such peacefulness in this..
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