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| photo prompt from Olive O'Brien's Creative Writing Ink |
She sat waiting for me at the shore,
Clouds, sunlight, colors welcoming more.
Time passed, blending with eternity,
Nature, beauty, glorious was she.
It was here, for the first time I met,
Peace, serenity... from a sunset.
If you enjoyed this poem prompted by this photo, please hop over to Olive O'Brien's Creative Writing Ink to see more inspired thoughts. Here is the link: http://creativewriting.ie/2010/09/07/september-7th/
6 comments:
Lovely take on the prompt, peace and serentity.
Thanks for posting the link:) It's a lovely poem and love the line, "time passed, blending with eternity."
I particularly liked the opening line, it was a great visual.
I really enjoyed the watery reflections of this and the previous post. Timely too, I've just dropped my OH off for a sailing trip today - it's a really big Spring tide today so crossing the bar at the estuary here should be a tad easier than it sometimes is!
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Peace and serenity - beautiful expressions of waterside experience. Your previous post is much the same, contrasting the differences in the ocean's moods.
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I love the way you personified the sunset. Nice visuals.
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