Of clouded moments thickened stagnant air,
Petrina Lesko
August 2011
This poem was written for both Magpie Tales which provided this wonderful photo prompt and for this week's Poetry Potluck over at Jingle Poetry where the topic is Love... and it's not being there. I was also attempting my first try at the Rhyme Royal form, however, I think some of my feet are not in true iambic pentameter. The rhyme scheme for this form is a-b-a-b, b-c-c or a-b-a, b-b, c-c. I really like the possibilities of this form so I will probably continue to work on it.
Adding a link to dVerse ~Poets Pub for OpenLinkNight.
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Image by Skip Hunt as shared at Magpie Tales |
Of clouded moments thickened stagnant air,
like towers of cumulonimbus dreams,
filled droplets of time, memories lie there,yet sunstripped days wait to slice, thus it seems,
showering this moment in fantasies,
of your touch, cutting deep into the heart,
always...forever, til death us do part.
Rusted sunshine twirls the blade so neatly,
cuts deep in time, of a long ago day,
the soul dies with a love shared once sweetly,
leaving pieces of dreams sprinkled this way,
showering this moment in fantasy,
of your touch, striking deep into the heart,
always...forever, til death us did part.
Petrina Lesko
August 2011
This poem was written for both Magpie Tales which provided this wonderful photo prompt and for this week's Poetry Potluck over at Jingle Poetry where the topic is Love... and it's not being there. I was also attempting my first try at the Rhyme Royal form, however, I think some of my feet are not in true iambic pentameter. The rhyme scheme for this form is a-b-a-b, b-c-c or a-b-a, b-b, c-c. I really like the possibilities of this form so I will probably continue to work on it.
Adding a link to dVerse ~Poets Pub for OpenLinkNight.